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1st post in Dark Passions...(untitled)
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1st post in Dark Passions...(untitled) |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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It is pretty long...but it is in a column and there are spaces....inspired by Stone Temple Pilots...and a GOOD friend Thanx B.J......  maybe you could help me come up with the music???(soft electric guitar) (band joins soft metal) you said... you saw Jesus... in that prison cell asking you to join him let him save you from hell you said his eyes shown bright his gazeing stare you... couldn't fight (more soft rhythm guitar..) (harder guitar w/ Band) the cards are dealt you hold the devils hand if he wins you'll repent but if win you do then his work here is through... other plans being made for your soul wasted life are you really still alive? and you danced into the eleventh hour and at midnight you cried nobody heard your left alone confused like a child can i bring you back to life? it isn't that scary working up a cold sweat you have to let go baby please... let me save your soul still walking in the shadows have no place to go so i will follow you one step closer one step behind fallen angels everywhere we are all searching nothing to find gaurdian of souls drowning on that sinking ship of fools and now you are wondering who to trust... creating your own sorrow fighting your own evil straight from a cloud of dust... Gods children have fallen we are all one of them to each he's made a promise ashes to ashes dust to dust did you walk the thin line? in this life you can't get by by buying your time (More hard guitar with band) fading into Soft guitar solo and you said he looked like Elvis said he comes in all types won't know him when you see him you better look twice... (Drum solo) (Band joins) you didn't turn away looked him in the eye and asked him why fly me to heaven you said am i worthy? have i made the grade? no repentnece lived the life that i was dealt they said you knew all along all the plans were set we are all just puppets you the puppeteer... couldn't help it this ugly world leaves dirt on your face my soul lost left in the undertow without a trace and my reality died now i have no where to hide... Julie :) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
wow. i liked that a LOT. you should post here more often! i think my favorite part was the "and you said he looked like elvis, said he comes in all types." this reminded me of counting crows, one of my favorite bands. jann elizabeth Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul Devil lover, time awaits you Now the party's over You're on your own -the eels |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is great! cant wait to hear it set to music! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
...this is nice....sounds like my kind of music...get it to music let me know...  |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Jan....Thank you for replying.....I really did have alot of inspiration for this one... Dawn....thank you for your kind reply.... gjam....I will be sure to let you know when it is put to music.....I should have a friend working on it.....thank you.... Julie :) |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey! I'm glad you stopped by and even posted! I loved this part: "fly me to heaven you said am i worthy? have i made the grade? no repentnece lived the life that i was dealt they said you knew all along all the plans were set we are all just puppets you the puppeteer... couldn't help it this ugly world leaves dirt on your face" Are you in a band or something? Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Interesting poem, and though youve probably heard this before, here it is again...Welcome to (dark) passions! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
LM...I am glad you liked it....no I am not in a band but I know alot of bands locally....and well I love to write you know...thanks for reading.... !!!...Thank you I am gald you liked it...I mostly post in open9 thanx for the welcome... Julie :) |
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