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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-09-12 08:56 PM


I do not think it wise
to be left to my own demise
as my mind wanders through
the puddles of the storm
you two created without forlorn
You said your intentions were true
now I sit here alone and blue
I never had a clue
I believed you both were true
Now I can only feel rue.
I defended you.
believed you argued
in defense of you two
only to find it was true...
No friend to help me heal
My heart is broken
My soul is shattered
and everyone around
doesn't know whats the matter
Medication this cant fix
there are no more tricks
If only I could turn back the
hands of time....
When I felt You two were
truely mine.
My best friend
My husband dear
Why didnt I see what was
so clear
I take that back
I really did I chose not
to believe all that was said



(Just rambling here )


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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-09-12 09:54 PM


Such a sad story, I can imagine how painful. Take care.
cat...

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-13 12:05 PM


BlueBrdy~~~I dont think that this was just rambling. I thought it was a good piece of work! You expressed yourself so good in this, I can actually picture what you are going through.

Keep up the good work!!!
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~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~


[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-13-2000).]

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