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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
darkness in front of me black pool behind deep dark pool of ruined feelings of scattered tears of a messed up life skin of scars black pool gets bigger deep dark pool with lessons to live with contradictions with pain its filled build up shell black pool flows over because of people because of words because of feelings tear down heart black pool is all nothing left nothing more nothing where I came from I'm gone black pool is all... I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Interesting poem, with some good imagery. The rest of the world may be dying, but it is the responsibility of the individual to reach his/her potential. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Good Poem yeah I think I understand how we make mistakes and how others words and actions can tear us apart good Job Blue |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
ok, this was written becuz of somthing that happened (duh.....) but it's not me now....ok, I wrote it like last week or so, but my moods like kinda change everyday... so my poems do too... just an explination... thnx for the comments!! luvz Virgin Suïcide I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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