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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-09-12 12:57 PM



Let me weave my web around you
in the pleasure of my silken bed
it is the chase,the thrill of seduction
let me spin you into my abduction

Feel my tentacles crawl over your skin
capturing you in my web of sin
while voyeurs in the moonlight
watch while you struggle in the night

You are a prisoner of my love
embraced within my silken glove
hear the wind softly sigh
licking the dewdrops from your eyes

Enjoy the web of love I have spun
because I have only just begun


[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 09-12-2000).]

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gjam
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1 posted 2000-09-12 01:03 PM


Wow..I love this...makes me want to hug someone    Sounds like you are doing well
Victoria
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2 posted 2000-09-12 01:10 PM


Thank you for reading gjam. Now go find someone to hug haha..
summer
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3 posted 2000-09-12 03:58 PM


Very good...Isnt it funny the control woman have, you portayed it exceptionally...
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-09-12 04:35 PM


Hard to resist a silken bed...James
LM
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5 posted 2000-09-12 05:22 PM


Oh, it's great! Loved the silken bed...  
Ta-ta!  

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


Victoria
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6 posted 2000-09-12 06:16 PM


Thank you Summer, Jmlee and LM..nice to hear from all of you..
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7 posted 2000-09-12 09:58 PM


Oh, I like this a lot. I feel a power and intent to capture and make him yield to your will. (or is that just my fantasy??)
Great stuff!
catalinamoon

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8 posted 2000-09-13 12:21 PM


ha ha  you must be the voyeur in the poem
Thank you for stopping by catalinamoon.

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