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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas 
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She is such a mystery A smile in the sky Turns the gray to blue But I don't know why She has alot of issues she causes lot's of pain with one night of passion I m pulled back in again I'v tried to keep my distance I've tried to give it space But when I close my eyes all i see is her face Her pretty blue eyes like a clear sky trying not to fall in love and asking myself why I live to see her smile I love to see her face but I can't have her heart all this time i waste. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi gjam, Welcome to passions it's so nice to have you here, wonderful poetry here, its sad when only one appears to be in love, very much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I dont think it is a waste because you have written a lovely poem about it.  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Nice job!!I dont see it as a waste of time either. Its a learning experience. ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
PERFICT! I totaly can relate as I'm sure you already know. I liked this allot! Keep it up, Bravo!  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
Thanks everyone....i actually like this one myself..it's only my second but i'll keep trying. Thanks for your interest |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
eeey! that's what we're here for!! " She has alot of issues she causes lots of pain with one night of passion I m pulled back in again I've tried to keep my distance I've tried to give it space But when I close my eyes all I see is her face" GREAT part!! luvd it! luvz, Virgin Suïcide I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Nicely done....i liked it a lot....still i don't think anything is a waste of time....just enjoy yourself in the moment while it lasts....just remeber what you got out of something...never walk away with nothing learned....  Julie :) |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Great poem, I really enjoyed and relate to it deeply. " I live to see her smile " is such a perfect line... Thanks for sharing, I know about this kind of waste of time myself... Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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