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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I am at a point where I need to think, Is this the style of life I should lead? Full of hatred and deception I fill myself, I will never run on empty, till I kill myself, fatality and existence I see them now in stages, Emotions of mine are ensnared in such cages, No search for freedom I shall lead, The answers are here, if I choose to proceed, Never, no more, I will complain, For I chose to seal myself with pain. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 09-11-2000).] |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hmz....I really liked this one... love, Virgin Suïcide... I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Aww Xeonox.... don't seal yourself with pain  If it is yourself you are referring to that is! Very deep poem indeed. I hope all is well. Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Xeonox, I agree with tara, you shouldn't seal yourself in pain. But if you must you should accept it as a part of life, cuz without it we wouldn't cherish the good times. There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path.... |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
maybe i agree that you shouldn't, but it does make for a lovely poem. jann elizabeth Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul Devil lover, time awaits you Now the party's over You're on your own -the eels |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
That is the way I see myself lot of the times. I have not lost hope though in myself.  Thank you for your concerns. I see we have new people that have joined the passions. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Lonelypoet said the perfect thing: accept it as a part of life, cuz without it we wouldn't cherish the good times. I think that this is so right. Wow this is really good though! Keep up the good work!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I do accept it as a part of life. Just decided to write about it. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I do accept it as a part of life. Just decided to write about it. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I wasnt saying that you didnt accept it. I was just saying that Lonelypoet said the perfect thing. Sorry!! ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
NO apologies requried my friend. I was also expressing my thoughts. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
I really relate to this poem at this point in my life its amazing sometimes how you come here and there is someone who seems to have felt or to be feeling as you are great job blue |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You are never alone blue. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Once again, a great poem, short, and to the point. Nice job. |
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