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Cyberspace and You |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Cyberspace and You click click click lights and keys then flick sentences and words impart someone's very tender heart click click click click click click lights and keys then flick sentences and words impart someone's life is torn apart click click click click click click keys resound in silent air someone's sending passion through sending it straight to you click click click click click click keys resound in silent air someone's sending passion through does not see evil nor its clue click click click click click click does right and wrong really stick within the hearts of those who'd know and use it for their purposes, just so…. click click click click click click be careful out there... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, that was unnerving...and interesting. Great warning. catalinamoon |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Thought-provoking words... and very true. Indeed... a warning. ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
To me this sounds like you are warning people, but I could be wrong. I really liked how you used the "click click click". Makes me wonder if some people out there are telling the truth about themselves or lying. ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all...a warning, indeed... |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
I heard that !!! Things appear so grand on this tiny little screen, its a whole other reallity....Good Job.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
when you walk the walk be careful of the talk you talk... thanks for listening, summer... |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Very cleverly done, but you'd better...click-click-click me a line of warning, for I am usually the last one to find out anything, then it's all over (sometimes).  |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Interesting piece, original Hope you didn't encounter any *liars* All the best! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marcy, special angels are watching for you... LM, you just never know... thanks! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW... ...WOW WOW... ...WOW does right and wrong really stick within the hearts of those who'd know and use it for their purposes, just so…. WOW... ...WOW WOW... ...WOW stunning work, Karilea... regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gee Sudhir, I guess you liked this one...thanks! |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
This was a nice poem, and it basically desribes to a "t", what i do in my basement, with the typing, and such. Good Work. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks. |
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