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Sweet Jeanette
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Sweet Jeanette |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I'd like to show you Now if I may The dream that I had This one summer day About an angle Whom on earth was set Walking on air Her name was Jeanette She floats on the breeze With sweetest of smile Causing my heart to freeze And stop for a while I dare not to stare But do take a chance For there's no compare To whom I now glance And now for the vision Or dream I should say Alone on the beach At the end of the day I sit down beside her To watch the sunset Together at last With my sweet Jeanette G. A. Webb < !signature--> Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't [This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 09-12-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is very lyrical and lovely. Enjoyed it very much. catalinamoon |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
This is beautiful... written very well!  Thanks for posting.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This is so sweet!!I wish someone would do that for me!!Write a poem all for me. I enjoyed it very much.< !signature--> ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-12-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed reading this poem about your angel Sweet Jeanette...James |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Catalina & Tara: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this.  ERIN: Have no fear my dear, I'm sure some day someone will write one of these for you. Thank you! jmlee: Thank you too. But to set the record straight, she's not my angle, just someone that I see from time to time. I'm debating as to weather or not to give this to her. But being the insane guy I am...I think I will. Hey, you only live once, might as well go for it! Right! Thank you all again! I'm glad you liked this. SEE, I TOLD YOU I COULD WRITE SOMETHING POSITIVE...LOL!!! Take care all! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
How sweeeeeet... I enjoyed it very much, it's really cute Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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