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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2000-09-11 08:36 PM


I'd like to show you
Now if I may
The dream that I had
This one summer day
About an angle
Whom on earth was set
Walking on air
Her name was Jeanette

She floats on the breeze
With sweetest of smile
Causing my heart to freeze
And stop for a while
I dare not to stare
But do take a chance
For there's no compare
To whom I now glance

And now for the vision
Or dream I should say
Alone on the beach
At the end of the day
I sit down beside her
To watch the sunset
Together at last
With my sweet Jeanette


G.  A. Webb

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Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't



[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 09-12-2000).]

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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-09-11 10:46 PM


This is very lyrical and lovely. Enjoyed it very much.
catalinamoon

taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-09-11 11:45 PM


This is beautiful... written very well!    Thanks for posting.
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-09-12 03:25 AM


This is so sweet!!I wish someone would do that for me!!Write a poem all for me. I enjoyed it very much.< !signature-->

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-12-2000).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-09-12 06:08 AM


enjoyed reading this poem about your angel Sweet Jeanette...James
G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
5 posted 2000-09-12 12:54 PM


Catalina & Tara: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this.  

ERIN: Have no fear my dear, I'm sure some day someone will write one of these for you. Thank you!  

jmlee: Thank you too. But to set the record straight, she's not my angle, just someone that I see from time to time. I'm debating as to weather or not to give this to her. But being the insane guy I am...I think I will. Hey, you only live once, might as well go for it! Right!  

Thank you all again! I'm glad you liked this. SEE, I TOLD YOU I COULD WRITE SOMETHING POSITIVE...LOL!!! Take care all!  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

6 posted 2000-09-12 05:35 PM


How sweeeeeet...  
I enjoyed it very much, it's really cute  
Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


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