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You And me |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
Not a day goes by, I don't see your face And long to be in your embrace, To finally get to kiss those lips To place my hands upon your hips, And look into those lovely eyes Shining like the moonlit skies To run my fingers through your hair A silkiness beyond compare And finally, caress your cheek So moved; that I cannot speak To hear that voice; oh so sweet it makes my heart pick up the beat To have and hold you finally To be together, you and me |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
WOW. I like your work!! This was really good. Is it about the same person the other one was about?? To have and hold you finally To be together, you and me Perfect ending to this good poem!!! ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
*sigh* terrific poem!  Very touching indeed! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
what a lovely poem. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely written. |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
written exteemly well...you portrayed "soul filled" love perfectly |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Ohhhh... this is really nice, very touching Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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