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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
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San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-11 03:52 PM


Yes well i am a new poet in Dark Passions. All of my previous poems and work are all posted up in Teen Poetry #3. These poems are from my 5th Cycle (my junior year in highscool). The poems in Teen Poetry #3 consist of me as a freshman (9th grade) in highschool. Anyway, here's the poem for all of you people. Comments, critism, anything whatsoever?

Alas, the Final Scapegoat:


Is this not a meaningful life?
A dripple of water, a beam of light.
So little in quantity,
Yet at the right moment
So praised as a heavenly gift.

And death?
Where oft blows winds of stillness.
The insidious frost locked in place.
A lonely setting to fixate upon,
And it awaits us all.

To ere angels devine.
Smiling in laconic bliss.
Oh site of sites!
And life, sweet life!
May it fade within thine eyes.

Lo the hypocritical axis of concrete phases!
Tis all that becons, and commands.
We lay within our stand still time.
Death being the last scapegoat,
And I being the last of me!





I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


© Copyright 2000 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-09-11 04:18 PM


Making me think a little bit..
Life is worth living
and deaths only mission
is to take our life away...James

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-11 04:32 PM


Dopey~~~Im glad that you decided to post here. This poem brought different types of thoughts to my head. Dont ask me why cause I dont know!!

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
3 posted 2000-09-12 01:16 AM


i liked it... and you have a wonderful vocabulary. (i like big words) please keep posting here.  

jann elizabeth



Don't take any wooden nickels
When you sell your soul
Devil lover, time awaits you
Now the party's over
You're on your own

-the eels

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
4 posted 2001-09-23 01:00 PM


Oooo look what I found.  

This is really different to what you're writing now. I like this one a ton. As I'm a big fan of death and his work, same with you, it hit a spot in me. Definitely worth hunting you down for.

Thanks for the read, Javi.  

~AF~

Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, merry, merry king of the bush is he. Laugh! kookaburra LAGUH! Kookaburra how gay your life must be.

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