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Alas, the Final Scapegoat!
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Alas, the Final Scapegoat! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Yes well i am a new poet in Dark Passions. All of my previous poems and work are all posted up in Teen Poetry #3. These poems are from my 5th Cycle (my junior year in highscool). The poems in Teen Poetry #3 consist of me as a freshman (9th grade) in highschool. Anyway, here's the poem for all of you people. Comments, critism, anything whatsoever? Alas, the Final Scapegoat: Is this not a meaningful life? A dripple of water, a beam of light. So little in quantity, Yet at the right moment So praised as a heavenly gift. And death? Where oft blows winds of stillness. The insidious frost locked in place. A lonely setting to fixate upon, And it awaits us all. To ere angels devine. Smiling in laconic bliss. Oh site of sites! And life, sweet life! May it fade within thine eyes. Lo the hypocritical axis of concrete phases! Tis all that becons, and commands. We lay within our stand still time. Death being the last scapegoat, And I being the last of me!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Making me think a little bit.. Life is worth living and deaths only mission is to take our life away...James |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~~~Im glad that you decided to post here. This poem brought different types of thoughts to my head. Dont ask me why cause I dont know!! ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i liked it... and you have a wonderful vocabulary. (i like big words) please keep posting here.  jann elizabeth Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul Devil lover, time awaits you Now the party's over You're on your own -the eels |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oooo look what I found.  This is really different to what you're writing now. I like this one a ton. As I'm a big fan of death and his work, same with you, it hit a spot in me. Definitely worth hunting you down for. Thanks for the read, Javi. ~AF~ Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, merry, merry king of the bush is he. Laugh! kookaburra LAGUH! Kookaburra how gay your life must be. |
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