Dark Poetry #2 |
a repost -- poem posted in another forum "I Love You |
Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I love you... I love you with all my heart, my mind, my soul I'll love you even beyond Death's knock at my door Like a stream flowing from the rains of an April day A flower's blooming scene during the month of May I love you without doubt and questions asked I'll love you even after eternity's time has already passed Like horizon's gold on morning's daily gift of light Or a full moon's pride on a cloudless and starry night I love you beyond love's own unexplored definition I'll love you even thru all of love's own contradictions Like an eagle's majesty as it spreads it's wings in flight Or that of a parent's touch on their newly born child Above all... I love you for I've realized one thing to be true I'll always love you for I realized that "Love is You" I love you... I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh whew, I know the feeling. I love someone just like this, and he turned me away. Its horrible. Great poem, so very expressive of that feeling. Catalinamoon |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Now this poem describes how much you love someone. Great work. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
acire,excellent poem. Elizabeth Barrett Browing would be pleased. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Awesome! I just loved it! "Love is You" ooohhhhh... I know the feeling. Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
How sweet! You've gone to great lengths to describe your love for this woman. I hope that she returned the favour in your direction. Wow...totally beautiful. Once again, well done. Write something again for us will you?! ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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