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Dark Poetry #2

The Webbing of Me

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-11 03:57 PM

Here is another poem from my 5th Cycle.

The Webbing of Me:

Enchanted forest crashes down.
My mouth was a smile,
But now is a frown.

I run as fast as time can run.
I time myself,
And the web I spun.

Years are gone but minutes here.
I walk amongst land
That I fear to fear.

Sip of water lost within.
Trying to catch food
So the web I spin.

The tears of encantation delight
Makes my mouth water,
Yet my soul in fright.

Insidious icycles waiting to be.
I despise the cold.
The web is me.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

1 posted 2000-09-12 08:31 PM

Good job Poet
the web is me
I can understand and relate to this poem
keep up the good work
Blue

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-09-23 01:13 PM

An interesting concept here. You being the web and all. There are some great thoughts running around in my head at the moment. Only one reply though? *tsks* that's just not right.

You should revise this and expand on it a bit. It'd be good to see it in a longer, more indepth format.

~AF~

Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, merry, merry king of the bush is he. Laugh! kookaburra LAGUH! Kookaburra how gay your life must be.

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