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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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K eeping our love forever true, A nd making our skies always blue. T rying so hard to hold on tight. I nsecure through every fight. E ternity is what I want with you, & I still K eep asking myself if you want it too. E ach & every day, I think of you when you're away. T elling myself we do belong, H olding your heart so very strong. T eaching myself to, O pen up to you. G rowing closer to you ever day, E very second, in every way. T alking to you each night on the phone, H oping that again soon we'll be alone. E motions of true love take over, R earranging my life so you can see, F inally, how much you mean to mean. O ften I find myself thinking of you, R eally hoping you're thinking of me too. E verything for you I feel, is V ery true, & very real. E asy for me now to smile, R eady to stay with you a long while. ~MAY 28TH 1999 & BEYOND!~ * If you read the 1st letter of every line it reads a secret message, cute huh?  hee hee!LOVE ELMO |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Awww this is such a sweet poem... really nice thoughts... I guess all of us have felt that way at one stage! Take Care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Ohh... so cute! I'm happy for you, it's great to find love and hold on to it Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
This was a lovely sight to me..... I did a poema little while ago which did the same thing....I called it initial Reaction. Your poem is a lot of fun...well done |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Elmo, It's a good poem and I love the acrostic in it. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe thanx every1, yea i wrote a couple poems like this, they take a lil more time than other poems. my poems usually take no more than 5 min to write, but this 1 took a lil longer. you can see another poem this style in the teen forum LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
ELMO~~~I love it. This is so good. I dont know how you do it. It is so hard for me to do that. But I keep trying hoping that one day it will work for me. Keep up the good work!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea thanx Erin this type is hard to make the words fit i had a lil trouble soo dont feel bad LOVE ELMO <3 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very creative way to tell someone you love them...James |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx James hey guys i got a question, my password used to be saved & now i have tto enter it every time How do i save it again? Thanx LOVE ELMO <3 |
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