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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Nothin I can do, surrounded by old loves far gone.... I try to have fun.. Try to lose myself into the rides and games and cotton candy. But I lose myself in the images of those who do not care for me anymore. What shall I do??????? I do not know what I shall do but for now I shall have fun with my friends who are the only ones who can truly make me laugh... But will it be enough??? {stay tuned} There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of when my wife left me and I was totally broken hearted. Couldn't eat..lost 25 pounds...always torturing myself thinking about her. I have always been able to totally relax watching movies so I tried that escape. It didn't work...I would find myself thinking about her at different intervals thruout the movie. It took time to heal my broken heart until than life can hurt a lot...James |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
yes, this struck a chord with me too. How terrible those times are when the heart feels like a hundred tons and everything loses meaning.... It hurts... You captured the frustration and anguish of this very well... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
In the longrun, no, it won't be enough. But for now, embrace those that do care, for they are the ones who will help you through this tough time. Friends are valuable!!  Well done! *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... questioning poem Lonelypoet... hope all is well. I agree with Isis Take Care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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