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Incomplete Dreams (a true story)
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Incomplete Dreams (a true story) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Walking along, just you and me and your little girl, a happy three. This is the dream I had last night. Thinking things would work out right. Suddenly, as a bolt of lightning, she appeared, the scene was threatening. Then I vanished like the wind, I'm invisible again. Portent of my future life? Love so sadly filled with strife. I feel an absence of myself, a lonely ghost upon a shelf. Another flash, and we were sitting in the car, such heated kissing. Too late now to turn away Hearts so branded have to stay. This time, when I reach to touch, you are gone, in smoke and dust. I vainly try to hold you close, my love, the one I need the most. This is how my nights are spent, living through a non-event. Daytime is as incomplete, search for love and find defeat. Perhaps it's all to no avail yet still my heart tries to prevail. Valiant efforts, hope flows on, as it will till you are gone. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ohhh Sandra... this made me cry  Such pain expressed... I guess if only circumstances were different huh? I hope one day things can be for you. You wrote this really well... take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
how sad yet beautiful I know how it feels to hope forever only to keep waiting forever hoping so much it hurts great job |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
sandra *hugshugshugs* many time has this happened to me. so i feel your pain hun. heres a story. i had a dream once about wanda. me and her started to kisses and get really heated up. i looked in her eyes and said i love you. right then she turned to sand and blew away. i was crushed. i woke up and rolled over to hold her and forgot she wasnt there. i was a mess for a very long time. great peice hun. i love it. love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Sadly, I too can relate... He comes to me in my dreams quite ofthen, sometimes it's so great I wish it would be real and wake up only to face the cruel reality...  Sorry... I'm really depressed now. Nice writing, as usual , Sandra. I wonder if you got my e-mail by now? "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi all, thanks to everyone for reading AND relating to this. LM, I did not receive an email..Can you write again? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I feel your pain deeply...sometimes the only way out is to let go of all the desires in our past and embrace new opportunities waiting to embrace us...all the hopes in our dream can remain the same only the faces change....James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh Sandra those sort of dreams are the scariest ones I know? And it's of no comfort to think you have finally found love and what even could be the love of your life and suddenly 'psst' it is gone, lost and there is nothing you can do. Scary thoughts. But I believe (have to believe) that we do have a certain say in our own destiny and sometimes we DO have the power to change things or not let things happen. Hope you can do same here.. *hugs* Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Cat... You have a very talented way expressing what you feel with the most heart felt poetry. I am simply took by your writings. This one paints a picture of love, despair and despriation, for a lover only left for a future dream. BTW.. My wife is pregnant again, and I am in Wissconsin for two weeks. I will be back in full swing on the 24th. I have much to write about. Love ya, Larry... |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Good poem!!! I like how it flows off the tounge!! Can relate...funny how things work ain't it? Thanx!!!!!!!! Click |
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