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Dark Passion |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Savor the passion in the shadows in the shaft of the moon embrace the hardness of the earth as lavender winds swoon Feel the fingers of the night entangled in you hair creeping upon your skin over your skin so bare Dew cascades in the night beneath the blanket of the dark beneath the raven's wings dark passion embarks |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Woah Victoria! EXCELLENT poem!  Enjoyed the read immensely! I could really see this as I was reading... good work! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sensual...enjoyable...and dark...James |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Shades of Edgar Allen Poe..lovely.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow!!! "Feel the fingers of the night entangled in you hair creeping upon your skin over your skin so bare" What a great image!!! I loved it! Thanks, Take Care! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you tara, jmlee, pegasus and LM.. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem..I love writing about the shadows in the night.. |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
very beautiful. makes me long for the night. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you jannel and for reading |
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