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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-09-08 12:02 PM



Savor the passion in the shadows
in the shaft of the moon
embrace the hardness of the earth
as lavender winds swoon

Feel the fingers of the night
entangled in you hair
creeping upon your skin
over your skin so bare

Dew cascades in the night
beneath the blanket of the dark
beneath the raven's wings
dark passion embarks


© Copyright 2000 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
taramw
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1 posted 2000-09-08 02:38 AM


Woah Victoria! EXCELLENT poem!    Enjoyed the read immensely!  I could really see this as I was reading... good work!  
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-09-08 05:54 AM


Sensual...enjoyable...and dark...James
pegasus111
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3 posted 2000-09-08 08:03 AM


Shades of Edgar Allen Poe..lovely..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

LM
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4 posted 2000-09-08 08:34 AM


Wow!!!
"Feel the fingers of the night
entangled in you hair
creeping upon your skin
over your skin so bare"
What a great image!!!  
I loved it!
Thanks, Take Care!

Victoria
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5 posted 2000-09-08 11:02 AM


Thank you tara, jmlee, pegasus and LM..
I am so glad you enjoyed my poem..I love writing about the shadows in the night..

Jannel
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6 posted 2000-09-08 01:12 PM


very beautiful. makes me long for the night.
Victoria
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7 posted 2000-09-08 02:04 PM


thank you jannel   and for reading
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