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ChibiDeathscythe
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since 2000-06-09
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0 posted 2000-09-07 10:58 PM


white as a coma
unburdened there,
the Faery realm lays rest

sometimes, at night,
flowers in her hair,
still air fills her chest

The Faery Queene!
And oh, how I
have wished that I could be

as beautiful and radiant
and wonderfull as she

Unbridled in immortal fantasies.

© Copyright 2000 Mary K. - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-09-07 11:25 PM


what a wonderful fantasy poem..lovely

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-09-08 02:42 AM


This is terrific!    Liked the words you used  

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
3 posted 2000-09-08 01:17 PM


what a wonderful wish...
Victoria
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4 posted 2000-09-08 01:44 PM


loved it.  
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