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His Life,Her Life?
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His Life,Her Life? |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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There's HIS life.....there's HER life They, are worlds apart Separated by silence And their world is empty So full of haunting echoes Of what used to be, Of what could be's??? They daily dream apart, They wish for a new start They live together, yet are alone So it cuts their heart, to the bone It is so cruel outside, with no refuge there The pain soon fastens it grip, to bring a tear Revival is hard for them to grip or see, And they no longer belong to the free There is no life left In this torrid mess For him.... For her.... Death is a stabbing reality without any rest! |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
I can so relate to this poem great job here keep up the good work |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I relate! I relate!  This was great, so sad, but wonderful descriptions indeed *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
wow! great piece of work! keep it up! love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh... sad... But beautifully written, great poem! Take care! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I felt this one, too well. His and Hers, and never shall they meet. What a life, hm? Nice poem, said a lot here. catalinamoon |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I lived this poem for 10 years..it really hit close to home with me..great piece. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
I want to thank you all for responding. Not so much because you thought the poem was "good", but because you took the time to say you related and share your heart. It somehow is encouraging to know others do share in our pain (odd as that may seem)??? Don't get me wrong, I am not saying I wish pain on anyone. I am merely saying, when they do have to endure it, it is a ray of hope when they express their pain and how they came out on the other side. People are remarkable! And so are all of you here at passions! Thanks! |
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