Golden Follicles Naked, Free, Blowing, Flowing, Dancing Tree

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Dark Poetry #2

Golden Follicles Naked, Free, Blowing, Flowing, Dancing Tree

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

0 posted 2000-09-07 09:23 PM

Golden Follicles Naked, Free, Blowing, Flowing, Dancing Tree

Golden follicles naked, free,
blowing, flowing, dancing tree.

Boiled shakes
of addiction's hate,
flooding cavities involved.

I'm swimming in years,
echoing fears,
I'm lost and losing,
I'm skipping beats.

Shaded gray and dimly lit,
keeper of the night,
in darkened fields of pitted earth
and devil's only fight.

Golden follicles naked, free,
blowing, flowing, dancing tree.

I'm strangled from
and swept up to,
I'm strung like marionettes.

Sagging skin and lifeless face
losing temptation's chase, of
now and years of tomorrow's tears.

Eliptical spaces binding me,
with breath of satin's soul.

Golden follicles naked, free,
blowing, flowing, dancing tree.

Cries of heated hands
in lands of let me be.

Let me see the way of free,
let me dance in dreams
in skies and seas
in happy trees.
Let me be,...
let me be.

[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 09-07-2000).]

ChibiDeathscythe
Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 128

1 posted 2000-09-07 10:50 PM

SpitFire, your poems are always so powerful! But this piece especially was just so... it just spoke to me, you know? A poem with a very loud voice ;-)

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

2 posted 2000-09-07 11:29 PM

there is great and dark emotion winding through this stunning piece..It gave me goose flesh..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2000-09-08 12:12 PM

Enjoyed it Spitfire.

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

4 posted 2000-09-08 02:36 AM

Yep... saw it! Great poem SpitFire... let me be, let me be... hmm... good ending. Take care.

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

5 posted 2000-09-08 06:51 AM

wow, I just loved this one!!

love, Virgin Suïcide...

"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2000-09-08 09:02 AM

Strong, very specifically planned out poem, it seems like you have really lived this feeling. The poem is great. Take care.
Sandra

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

7 posted 2000-09-08 01:14 PM

wow. this just had so much of everything. i loved it.

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