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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-09-07 09:22 PM


this was written about 2 years ago...during the 'mike saga'...dedicated to [Nikolette - it's not fair to put another person's name here for public viewing. Thank you - Christopher]

~Dead for you~

for once i lied to you
now i shall die for you
many nights i've cried for you
and yet i will not lie with you

my life was for you
all the things i'll ever do
i will want to do them with you
now i shall die for you

i knew i wanted you
i thought you loved me too
all the things we've been through
make me die for you

never will i love another
for my love knows no other
you were my only lover
now i shall die for you

so cursed is my heart
without you i'm in the dark
i can't think about my love
and now i'm dead for you

Nikolette Sadness
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i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.


[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 09-07-2000).]

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SpitFire
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Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-09-07 09:39 PM


~Nikolette,...this displays a bit of the turbulance that was going on back then, so well written and expressed. Taka care NS. *Peace.
Jesse Jaymz
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Youngstown, ohio
2 posted 2000-09-07 09:51 PM


wow hun
*hugs*  this sounds like i was.  almost exact.  but trust me you will love agian.  i know that for a fact.  cuz i thought i would never love agian.  till some country girl proved me wrong.     i wonder if you can guess who that person is??  hehehehe  great work hun. *hugs*  keep it up.
love ya
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

pegasus111
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ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2000-09-07 11:33 PM


"And even from this blackest pit, foul with the stench of betrayed hearts, your spirit shall rise and be reborn in the light"...pegasus111

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

4 posted 2000-09-08 12:16 PM


Oh Nik...
How do you do it???
It's great... I just love this concept "I'll die for you", it's really romantic.
Take Care hon!

Nikolette Sadness
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5 posted 2000-09-08 12:23 PM


SF...thanks hun...lots of...yeah...turbulance...then and now actually...he won't talk to me..

jesse...*a country girl can survive???*

pegasus...thanks for the reply...scary but thanks...

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Nikolette Sadness
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6 posted 2000-09-08 12:26 PM


LM...there you go sneaking in with those inspiring comments!...thank you very much hun...oh and email me!!!!

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

darkstar
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Port Richey, Fl, USA
7 posted 2000-09-08 03:19 PM


Great poem Nik....sorry I got kicked off last night before I could read it...I liked it a lot.

Dark Star

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