Dark Poetry #2 |
Questions ... |
Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Questions from the Heart to the Mind A flutter in my heart Emerged as you came near I want to believe Your intentions are dear Yet still I struggle to Contrive Is your character as I fear? Trust must be gained, How do I over come My hesistations? Could you be just like all those others? Who are naught much else than thieves? Thieves of Hearts Preying upon emotions Whom caught unaware Set themselves unbeknownst For the coming fall. How does on truely know If their character is how they show? Or if below The exterior they are a dark and twisted soul? "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
you don't know..not for a while..that's why I'm leary of so called whirlwind relationships..I think the marriage statistics will bear me out on this. But, if one insists on rushing headlong into a relationship blindly, I remind them of the old carnival addage..."You pays your money and you takes your choice" peace the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
You don't say it in the same way that I do, but we are on the same wave length with your trust level! Great work here, it's all a risk isn't it? Like a huge gamble each time. Also, I couldn't help but notice your quote is by Edgar Allen Poe! Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
good jOb here I dont know what to say about trust once you loose it its hard to find and then the fears echo in your mind. great job. Blue |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
yes, trust can be hard to give....but you cant always hold back...sometimes you have to give a little and see where it takes you...great poem! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Time will tell...moving forward slowly...that is my method...trust is a serious issue with me as well...James |
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