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Cyndey
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-09-06 08:18 PM


Questions from the Heart to the Mind

A flutter in my heart
Emerged as you came near
I want to believe
Your intentions are dear
Yet still I struggle to Contrive
Is your character as I fear?

Trust must be gained,
How do I over come
My hesistations?
Could you be just like all those others?
Who are naught much else than thieves?

Thieves of Hearts
Preying upon emotions
Whom caught unaware
Set themselves unbeknownst
For the coming fall.

How does on truely know
If their character is how they show?
Or if below
The exterior they are a dark and twisted soul?




"All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream"
Edgar Allan Poe

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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-09-06 08:58 PM


you don't know..not for a while..that's why I'm leary of so called whirlwind relationships..I think the marriage statistics will bear me out on this. But, if one insists on rushing headlong into a relationship blindly, I remind them of the old carnival addage..."You pays your money and you takes your choice"   peace

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

firejerm
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
2 posted 2000-09-06 10:20 PM


You don't say it in the same way that I do, but we are on the same wave length with your trust level!  Great work here, it's all a risk isn't it?  Like a huge gamble each time.  Also, I couldn't help but notice your quote is by Edgar Allen Poe!

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
3 posted 2000-09-07 06:22 PM


good jOb here
I dont know what to say about trust
once you loose it its hard to find
and then the fears echo in your mind.
great job.
Blue

poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
4 posted 2000-09-08 08:13 AM


yes, trust can be hard to give....but you cant always hold back...sometimes you have to give a little and see where it takes you...great poem!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-09-08 03:55 PM


Time will tell...moving forward slowly...that is my method...trust is a serious issue with me as well...James
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