Dark Poetry #2 |
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Laughing |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Laughing (yay for me! my first happy poem) Sitting with my friends Having a good time Laughing And making this little rhyme Making little jokes Being there makes it ok Laughing All my fears away Smiling at them all I’m filled with glee Laughing Finally I’m free |
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Nikolette Sadness![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
wait a sec danni...your happy and i'm not...no fair...make me laugh fool! heheh there i go... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Hehe...Thanks Nik... Dark Star |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
This one is cool. Have a laugh or two for me, would ya...lol. ![]() G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
This is good darkstar... I could actually hear the pure delight in being free ![]() ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I realized that I could be in the worst mood, but if someone makes me smile or laugh it just erases all the memories of bad thoughts for the time. Keep on laughing its good for you!! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
its great to see you smiling! hope the feeling lasts....and it made for a very nice poem! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
heya darkstar!!! it's just great to read this one!! love to see ya happy < !signature-->![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... [This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Darkstar! ![]() I'm so happy you're laughing and having a good time! I love it when people laugh, I'm proud to say that I usually make people laugh actually ![]() ![]() Great poem, made me wanna meet up with my friends today! |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Darkstar! ![]() I'm so happy you're laughing and having a good time! I love it when people laugh, I'm proud to say that I usually make people laugh actually ![]() ![]() Great poem, made me wanna meet up with my friends today! "Did I ask too much? More than a lot You gave me nothing Now it's all I got..." U2/One |
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