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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
LOVE: Love is like an ocean's roar A powerful drawing to the shore Yet love is like a gentle stream Flowing, softly, towards a dream Love is like an eagle's wings A soaring, lifting, heart that sings Yet love is like a robin's breast Quietly offering its best Love can be a raging storm Tearing, destroying, causing mourn Yet love can also be the day When sun shines and lights the way Love can be a bitter pill Taken once, causes chill Yet love can be a costly potion That causes precious life devotion Yet all these words can not describe Not nearly what I feel inside Tasting your love, seeing your heart I never want to be apart You, receiver of a tortured soul Prepared for all to make me whole For in the awakening of hearts bared Lies the realisation of an eternity shared. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
very well done..how elusive the emotion of love is..how fragile..how versitile.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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erica New Member
since 2000-09-07
Posts 8global citizen |
wise words! love has so many aspects and is so strong and yet so fragile - I really related to the picture you painted so eloquently |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Couldn't agree more! Love has so many facets some good and some not really but you can't really go without it and eventually the raging storm quiets down for a bit and allows the sun to shine... hhhmmm... and then is when you're truly happy. If you think about it, during our entire lifetime we're looking for those pieces and crumbs of joy, those sunny days... So tho the conclusion I'll add - great job, I liked!  |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
*sigh* What a beautiful poem... very poignant... captured it perfectly! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice LOVE poem!! Flowed soo nicely across my mind!! Take Care, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh, this is very touching.....every word rings true.....*sigh* ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This is so true love is so many things---good, bad, exciting, terrifying----but in the end it is worth it all. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This is so true love is so many things---good, bad, exciting, terrifying----but in the end it is worth it all. "There is no always forever-just this-R.Smith broken glass never cuts the way it should-Gin |
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