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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I'm contemplating my payback Amidst this anger I now stack So do tread lightly and watch your back For you're the next one I'll attack I'll be so charming and so sweet Then rip your heart out clean and neat I'll do it all with my deceit Until ashes of love lay at my feet "Why are you doing this?" you would say "There's got to be another way You must live with love throughout the day For it to once again come your way" For all of that I do not care Nor for your hypocritical air Of this being cruel I am aware But you did it to me, now is that fair You've proven to me that love's not true Especially the love that comes from you Now the plastic judgement that you spew Sickens me through and through I release you now this is my right And cast you far out of my sight For it's now love that I will fight And expose the world to love's great plight G. A. Webb < !signature--> Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't [This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I'll admit, this one and the other one that I just posted (DISCONTENT) are pure fire. I hope you all like'm anyways.  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I liked both of them...are you angry at somebody? I think so... Dark Star |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Goodness G,...is everything alright? I like the intensity in this and the strong words. Fire is right! Heated and heavy messages. Take care of you k? *Peace. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
OH MAN was this riddeled with errors. I really should proof read better...LOL. SORRY!!!  Darkstar: When I wrote this I was very angry with somebody. I wrote this a couple of months ago. I'm not angry anymore, I just don't care. I don't care about anything. I was extreemly hurt when I wrote this because I was in love with somebody (and sadly I still love her, I must be insane) who didn't love me in the same way. It was because of her that I started writing in the first place. She was my inspiration. I haven't talked to her sense. Oh well, perhaps are paths will cross again some day, but I won't hold my breath. Thank you for reading this. SpitFire: Yes, everything is ok Spit, thanks for the concern and take care of you too K? G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
ah, this is harsh..and these words have been spoken many times by me to *people* who push their limits too far! this was pleasantly intense ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow... it's intense alright... I understand your anger but you know, even though it's painful to love someone who doesn't love you back, you can't really blame that other person for not loving you, it's not fair... It's not like they don't return your affection intentionally... and believe me, I've been on both sides of this story. Love is something we can't quite understand or explain, maybe it's some chemicals in our brains as my friend told me and you can't control them... Please don't think I disrespect your feeling, on the contrairy. It was just some thoughts I wanted to share coz I'm so familiar with the situation. Anyway I'm happy you're feeling better now  Take Care! |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
poutprincess: Well, I'm glad you liked my intensity and can relate to this piece. Thank you! LM: You're right, I can't blame her for not loving me the way I did her, that's why I'm not mad any more. It just kind'a sucks always being in that kind of a situation. One can't force another person to love them no matter how much one feels for them and if one tried, one only finds the person pushed further away. I know that all too well having also been on both ends of that stick. I don't think you were disrespecting me, on the contrary, I appreciate your thoughts and honesty. Thank you and take care to you! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Yeah... you're right, it sucks and I'm in this situation for many years (and I'm on both sides of this, can you believe it? Simulataneously...) And now the one who has been pushing me is angry with me for not telling him to go to hell basically 5 years ago... and I don't think really that it's my fault I couldn't fall for him no matter how I tried... just as I can't blame my love for not loving me... I'll stop with this depressive monologue... I'm glad you weren't offended! Thanks for replying "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
I sure can relate to this poem..I too am in the situation you were in.. I hope I can find the strenth to toss her too and fight love....Very good |
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