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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
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0 posted 2000-09-12 12:55 PM


We Are But  A Vapor


I stared,  as I lingered beyond reality
For all that I could HUMANLY,  possibly see?

ALL I COULD SEE.......


Was  all   "I"  wanted to see,
Everything but  the truth, glaring at me.  


A vapor blowing in the wind,
Time that was no more to me.
It blew by so quickly, too free
No more,  to remain a mystery.

I remembered what I saw that day,
It was " beautiful" to me in some strange way.
I could not explain this love I had that made me sad,
The one I felt for this friend, my  lover, my dad.

Why did he have to leave so early,  and why so soon
That is what I asked myself that hour,  that I rehearsed that tune?
I could not answer that question,  no matter how I tried
It was too much that came at me, and then I cried......and cried.

I wanted to remember him just as he was
Happy and go lucky,  at home with us for this cause
The joker he was at times, no harm he meant
He knew how to make people laugh, he was often spent

I smiled.......as I saw him,  as HE  truly was

So...

HIS  memory remains in my heart for now
My emotions will take a final bow
I will let the past go, and for now......  let HIM go
For  I know one day I will join him,  yes  it is so!!

He is gone, but will never be forgotten

For......

Too much love remains in our hearts


Our love will remain
Beyond the grave.

Our love to Dennis we always gave
The memories we will always save!

Dedicated to Dennis
Taken too suddenly, and too young
From us this day

September 11, 2000


This is a memorial I wrote for a neighbor of mine, who was tragically taken in a farming accident today.   He leaves behind a young wife, 2 very young newly wedded daughthers, and one teenage son.  It made  me sooooooo sad, especially since so many of my days,  I have spent not valuing my own  life.    I often do not realize my  main purpose is to be here for others too.   I think we are here for others as much as ourselves.  Wow.......we are here for more than ourselves maybe ,hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm what a thought????   to really keep(really doing some reflecting here)?????? Yes we could be......cry.....cry......cry. Please lift them up passions.....this is a hard one, I felt it hit my heart like  ton of bricks.  Thanks!  




[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 09-12-2000).]

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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-12 01:02 AM


Illusion~~~Let me start off by telling you I am very sorry to hear what happened. But with the help of you, you can keep him alive.

HIS  memory remains in my heart for now
My emotions will take a final bow
I will let the past go, and for now......  let HIM go
For  I know one day I will join him,  yes  it is so!!

He is gone, but will never be forgotten

Even though he passed away he will never be forgotten. And just as you said one day you's will meet again.


~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-09-12 01:38 AM


I'm so sorry to hear that... your wrote such a beautiful poem for obviously a wonderful person.  Neighbours can become such an integral part of our lives that it is a real shock and hurts heaps when they suddenly are taken from this life.

You're correct... we are also here for others.    Take care.

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

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