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eegood
Junior Member

since 1999-11-16

Posts 41
Chicago,IL

0 posted 2000-09-11 06:10 PM

It's midnight
   as I turn out the light.
I close my eyes,
   yet, I see you.
Why do I still feel the way I do?

I held onto the tears
   when you left...
You didn't see them,
   as I wept.

I don't know how long
   I can go on like this
      pretending my world didn't end
When it's you I miss...

It's hard to hold back the tears
      overflowing in my heart
But harder to stop them at night
      when my control falls apart.

I look out the window
      nothing but darkness I see...
         But that is nothing
      compared to the emptiness
         within me....

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-11 06:42 PM

WOW this is really good. It sounds like you just poured out all that you are feeling. Whoever this was must have been really special. And I hope that one day you and this person end up back together.

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

2 posted 2000-09-11 07:00 PM

We all have to pour out sometime. Glad that you decided to pour it out here, eegood.
--Little Girl

quote:
The little girl runs and plays within her own world of fantasy. She is the future.

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

3 posted 2000-09-11 07:03 PM

We all have to pour out sometime. Glad that you decided to pour it out here, eegood.
--Little Girl

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-09-11 10:52 PM

The pain you are feeling is so well portrayed here. I have been there, and visit often, that lonely space, missing the one you love.
Take care.
catalinamoon

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

5 posted 2000-09-11 11:52 PM

Yours words really touched my heart. I hope everything ends up okay for you. Take care.
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

gjam
Member

since 2000-08-23

Posts 85
Arkansas

6 posted 2000-09-12 12:29 PM

...This is me exactly...I feel your pain. Nothing we can do...great poem

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

7 posted 2000-09-12 12:33 PM

beautiful, I hope things work out for you.

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