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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
the last drop of dew falls from the last red rose, our winter has finally come to bloom the drop freezes to ice before it even strikes the grass and when it does, the blade shatters into diamonds... and is carried off with the wind the screams of the void fill my fragile soul, its the only thing that wont shatter it and all thats left that can still stand pure is the vision of a virgin, in a field of ice... because shes the only one who can still cry but her tears harden from the cold and fall upon earth just as harshly as the dew from the last red rose niether any significance final piece of purity in a world that has grown sour, time freezes and its our final hour dont be bothered because before now you slowly grew numb it doesnt matter if you saw it coming, because now you cant even care the sky melts from blue to grey and washes all the normal beauty then leaves me with a stained and dark heart the virgin starves because no one is there to feed her her red cheeks go pale and she freezes and waits to be shattered by a tear |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Dark and stark in it's finality. Great imagery here, a dark tale well told!  *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
wow...this was just great....(hehe, virgin, roses...sorta my things...) I just read it three times...and if it's ok with you, I'm gonna print it...wow, loved it soooo much!!! lots of love, Vrigin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Beautiful imagery Great job, take care! |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
absoloutely beautiful... i could see myself standing in the field almost...you got me shira |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i watched this in my mind and it was beautiful and chilling |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
*looks at the other replies* See....I told ya it was great. Hmm...wonderful imagery, chilling, beautiful, blah, blah, blah...you get the idea. Keep writing! (pwease)LoVe, Angel Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns. ~*Guardian of Light*~ |
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