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Let us eat hate.....
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Let us eat hate..... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
some ways speak too loud so lets go under another mushroom cloud always bitter and positively down but there lies the cure -let us eat hate let us eat hate- for nothing tastes this good nothing means your understood i still believe theres no place for me except a soundproof room where i can tear my eyes out for all eternity and they still scream at me they still scream in me squeezing every drop out being dead must be the key a hero is not what i wish to be though its a wonderful way to bleed oh why cant i move like a brillant agony for all the world to see "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything" "I am too connected to you to Slip away, to fade away. Days away I still feel you Touching me, changing me, And considerately killing me." The Jackal |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
wow!! this is the ghost of edgar allen poe talking to us from the other side..brrr..chilling but, sooo effective..nice piece the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
WOW! "for nothing tastes this good nothing means your understood i still believe theres no place for me except a soundproof room where i can tear my eyes out for all eternity and they still scream at me they still scream in me" "a hero is not what i wish to be though its a wonderful way to bleed" WOW again! powerful thought provoking stuff here! much enjoyed ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
for nothing tastes this good nothing means your understood i still believe theres no place for me except a soundproof room where i can tear my eyes out for all eternity and they still scream at me they still scream in me squeezing every drop out being dead must be the key a hero is not what i wish to be though its a wonderful way to bleed oh why cant i move like a brillant agony for all the world to see ======================== you just did... you do everytime you write and share one of your brilliant poems ... and your poetry allows you to be heard.. even in that soundproof room ... with this gift...you always have a voice awesome poem Jac ...truly... take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i was elated to see that you were still here after all my time away, as i remember your work being very lovely to read, and this did not any any way disappoint me. i especially liked "they still scream at me they still scream in me" |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
i love this. i get this feeling a lot and yet you express it so much better than i have ever been able to... its beautiful. i cant really express the rest of what id liek to say, i am at loss for words... shira |
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