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Judgement Day |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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When the angel of death finally knocks lightly at my door and beckons me to follow When the tally book is opened by those bony fingers and they scrape slowly down the columns of my life Adding, subtracting assigning a score deciding my fate for all eternity What will I feel when I arrive at my destination will it be remorse Will I find the peace that eluded me in life will I have friends there or will I be alone Will the sun finally shine upon this troubled soul riddled with the mistakes of a lifetime Or will the total darkness of oblivion cover me with the endless sleep of emptyness Only the death angel knows for sure and...alas he speaks not to me the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
What a powerful poem! Your questions are none any one mortal can answer, you shall not know until that day when death politely knocks. And I should pray you don't know any time soon. Your poem was excellent and very thought provoking! Keep it up! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
Oooooooooh, these questions, I have wondered myself, this gave me goosebumps!! good job, *S* bj ~the breath, a mystery of it's own ~~ |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Pegasus111, Great poem. I really liked the ending keep up the good work my friend. Dreams are the the gateways to making the impossible possible So many words, for the broken heart... |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Jessica, BJ, LonelyPoet, thank you my friends... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hey, great poem! wondered about that myself a lot of times too.....btw, check your mail! love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
thanks..got your mail too..  that was very sweetthe woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I should say let's call it the life Angel for that's as I BELIEVE in eternity. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'm glad he DOESN"T speak to you!! Good thoughts here, I BELIEVE in all the positives, but still we all shall have to wait and see won't we?  *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Rosebud, Isis..I am looking out from behind the eyes of another... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Only the death angel knows for sure and alas he speaks not to me." I certainly hope not because if he does you might not like what you hear. He might say hey... today is the day...now get your self over here..right away...ha..ha..I found this interesting...I look forward to a spiritual life after my body dies...we all know our birthdate but none know their death date. We can't die until we die but we will die when we die...and we will... James |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
James..you are too funny...lol the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow! Magnificent!!! I absolutely loved it I have these thoughts every "Yom Kipur" |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
beautiful poem... very thoughtful... thanks,shira |
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