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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Probably Don't even try to come any closer Don't even try to look in my eyes Don't even try to speak to me Don't say anything at all Can't you see what you're doing to me? Breaking my heart, but hey, it's not your fault You can't help me falling in love With you, you're such a great one But it's almost impossible, what more can I say? I know it's true, you probably too Wondering just how long it wil take Before I'll get over it...probably won't I want you close Want to see your eyes, looking in mine Want to hear you Hear you say you love me But it'll probably never happen.... ok, I'll just post this two today...I'll spread the others... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
you are a river of ideas..  nice piecethe woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hehe...never knew I was...never knew I could be....thnx!! love, Virgin Suïcide...! "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Want to see your eye, looking into mine. Hear you say you Love me. But it will probably never happen." Excellent writing...an interesting honest way you look at life..perhaps it probably could happen sometime..ha..ha..made me think about what I want and need from a woman...James |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Cool poem... Dark Star |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
i second that, darkstar.. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Thnx to all... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Virgin~~~This is really good, but why do you have so much negativity in this one? Hear you say you love me But it'll probably never happen |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
duno, guess it's just me.... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I was just asking, I hope you dont take it the wrong way. Cause alot of people tend to take things the wrong way. OK?? |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
no, it's ok....but I'm just always kinda negative about myself.... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh!!! Virgin... It's like hearing myself talking... It's so weird... But in a good way! (I think... I mean, the situation sux!)Great one, enjoyed it so much, as if I read my diary or something (if I had one...) Take Care! "Did I ask too much? More than a lot You gave me nothing Now it's all I got..." U2/One |
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