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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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NO RETURN Darkness within Brightness without Shadowed by a, cloud of doubt. Am I still living, deep inside? Lacking pain, that I hide. Sharp razor, not even a flinch. Trickling blood, just from a pinch. Life's a blur, death sounds clear. No more need, to ever fear! Death welcomes me, life turns away. No longer easy, for me to stay. I walk toward death, he grabs my hand. Life's slipping, like hourglass sand. When the last grain, comes tumbling down, I change my mind, & turn around. Is it too late? Have I givin in? Did he take my soul? I'm now dead within! <3 ELMO <3 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
qtiepieelmo. This is a strong poem, but I think it's gonna get bumped. Are you alright? Email me if I can help. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Qtpie, are you OK? It's not too late to turn around, you know? |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
very strong poem. It is never to late! John D LeClare |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yes, don't worry guys I'm ok for the most part. I just get times when I'm all alone & I have feelings like this. Like I'm dead inside, a walking zombie with no future. I feel i have no purpose sometimes & like my life's going no where. I'm at a tough point in my life right now- college, & I've lost contact with a lot of my close friends & i feel like my past-me is slipping away. Poetry is my voice & the only way i can express myself & it helps so much to get good replies. My boyfriend helps me a lot too he shows me how much i have going for me & i know it will eventually get better. But thanx every1 for being concerned & hopefully this won't get bumped  LOVE ELMO |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
i hope with all my heart that u don't really mean what u wrote, qtpieelmo.. but anyway, nice piece. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Well, yes I did mean what I wrote at the time. I never write fake poetry. My poems are my expression, my voice, so everything in them is sincere, but I'm not feeling like this all the time. You can see in some of my poems that I am happy. All of us just have bad times in our life & some bad memories & my poems just focus in on them little pieces of life. I'm glad u all enjoyed it LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I can understand where you are coming from, but I believe this one just scraps in as passable It is good you can express these feelings, we all have to, and hopefully expressing and venting helps..Well written Elmo!! *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
beautiful poem... i can understand the feeling...i feel it a lot too...emptiness...hopelessness. very painful... shira |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
really a great poem elmo! lucky for you it's not bumped already!! i know the feeling, had it a lot of times...not at the mo I suppose...it comes and it goes, and I've turned around everytime... take care & a lot of love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
qtpie~~~This is really good. I like it. You should really post more in Teen, your work is good that I had to hunt you down to find it. LOL NAh I didnt hunt you down it found me!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Really great poem...hope it doesn't get taken off... So many times have I felt like that. Dark Star |
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