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Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

0 posted 2000-09-04 07:20 PM


  The memory of love
remains here inside my
heart.
  The love of her will
always remain.
  But now it is time to
let only the dreams mourn
her loss.
(since this was written I have found someone)

Dreams are the the gateways to making the impossible possible
So many words, for the broken heart...

© Copyright 2000 Chris - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-09-04 08:13 PM


I am glad you have moved on..sometimes it is not as easy as one would think..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-09-05 12:34 PM


Nice poem  

"let only the dreams mourn
her loss"

Excellent description!

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

silentsky
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114

3 posted 2000-09-06 12:54 PM


beautiful
thanks,
shira

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-09-06 06:04 AM


This poem is very bittersweet...happy for you that you found someone new...James
moshpit
Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
5 posted 2000-09-06 09:50 AM


absolutely loved the last 3 lines.. exellent piece, Lonelypoet.

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