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HM3
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since 1999-07-15
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0 posted 2000-09-03 05:26 PM


It hit me like a tidal wave
Heart sinking with the undertow
Mind spinning, my soul enraged
Not knowing which way to go

Waves crashing can not find the shore
Take a deep breath then I sink down
Hope wanes, I drift even more
Love fades, darkness all around

Emotions drag me out to sea
Sharks stalking mysteriously

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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
1 posted 2000-09-03 07:20 PM


Emotions drag me out to sea
Sharks stalking mysteriously

really enjoyed reading the poem especially the last part.

Sit down and bargain
"Until your tongues are dry If the havoc and the shame continue We'll drown you in our putrefaction" Primo Levi


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