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Somebody Else's Clue
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Somebody Else's Clue |
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LenMcC1 Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 68 |
Somebody Else's Clue I was thinking of myself late one night Since no one ever usually did I remembered all things that happened to me The good, the bad, and the in-between I could see a simple lie that I once told That happened to change my life I could see a simple death that was foretold That used to make me cry There was a time when all the dreams I had Were going to come true But now I realize that all the time I had somebody else's clue I thought about all the times I was high And then when I came down I never wanted to leave my life But I was already off the ground Someone used to say that all things pass But phrases like those never last Thinking in maze will always make Thoughts clouded in a daze There was a time when all the dreams I had Were going to come true But now I realize that all the time I had somebody else's clue Get up every morning at my own time The world has already started Sometimes the day is rewarding But mostly it's just a life Raining on a street of small complexion That's the one I like to walk People across the street always talk Cause I have no reflection There was a time when all the dreams I had Were going to come true But now I realize that all the time I had somebody else's clue |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
this has the makings of an original poem, I think it might need just a little editing, but the words make me think, and that's good! *S* bj |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Hmm, I put things into two categories. Yum and Eww. This falls into the Yum Category, yum yum. Welcome to DP, if you aren’t new here, then welcome back…lalalalablah… --- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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