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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-08-29 11:30 PM


This is my soliloquy
lots of hope and fantasy
tinged with touches of delusion
always loving an illusion.

Wanting that which cannot be
still my heart yearns to be free
it chooses without my consent
unto his soul it has been sent.

Knocking, knocking, evermore
hope he opens wide his door
question why my life is fraught,
turmoil all that I have wrought.

This is how my life's comprised
shreds of love and bounteous lies.
On and on I try again
in pursuit of happy ends.


My second attempt of the day to say who I am, thanks to Deranger's challenge.


© Copyright 2000 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
1 posted 2000-08-30 01:00 AM


I’m flattered that I have inspired someone!  Yet the words so inspired are sad, lonely ones.   I too, prefer a good illusion to harsh, merciless reality.   Prize you shreds of love, for some don’t even have a shred.
I feel like I have look into your eyes and plummeted through the recesses of your soul…thanks for the rush.



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“Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-08-30 01:02 AM


you may be that, but you are also a lot more!!

Caring, thoughtful, considerate, hurt, confused, and a good friend!!  
Isis
P.S.  Need more????????  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-08-30 08:56 AM


To Deranger, thanks, I like it when someone sees that part of me.  Isis, thanks for always being my friend. So much turmoil in life, it sure helps to share some of it.
Sandra

JSage
Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91
Nashua, NH USA
4 posted 2000-08-30 09:53 AM


when you give your soul completely to someone else without leaving any for yourself... its so easy to hurt.  Beautiful poem.  

-Jes

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
5 posted 2000-08-30 12:49 PM


I'm glad you're like that cat   Sensitive, artistic and hopeful.
Where would we be if didn't believe in those fairy tales?


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
6 posted 2000-08-30 02:46 PM


Great piece catalina! I couldn't have said it better myself. Thank you for sharing this!  

Catalinamoon huh??? Are you from So. Cal. I'm from Huntington Beach and see Catalina Island almost every day when I drive to and from work. So the next time I see it I'll think of you. See ya!  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


Forrest Cain
Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA
7 posted 2000-09-02 08:12 PM


Havn't been to dark passions in a while.
I'm glad I dug back for this one. I always
feel sad after lonley poems. Pardon me
while I take my prozac. I hope some of
your fantasies turn to realities. Unless
of course the poem is the fantasy and your
reality is perfect. Ahh I didn't think so.
Nice write.

forrest

Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
8 posted 2000-09-02 08:40 PM


Whoa...Cat. Good, No, GREAT poem!!!
I like this!!! You are so very complex!
  Made me think....
           Thanx!!

Click



boji stone
Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62
USA
9 posted 2000-09-02 09:34 PM


i think that is why several of
us write.....to express those
things that need to be said,
you did good with the expressing ~~

*S*
bj

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