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Made in Hell
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Made in Hell |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Made in Hell Look at this girl, still young and naive. Can't blame her for why she was destined to live. Waking up in the morning, she doesn't know Of the terrible evening she was conceived. Mommy is hiding the horrible truth Quietly trying her conscience to soothe. Still blaming herself for all that went wrong While he's walking freely, player so smooth. For grandma was just too blind to see That something was not as it should be. "Mommy, a monster comes into my room" Grandma just laughed, "No monsters run free". Her daughter was quietly screaming for help Wondering if maybe she brought it on herself Every night since she was twelve At 10 p.m. sharp went trough the same hell. Six years it lasted, grandma couldn't guess Why did her daughter appear so distressed. Then finally one evening she just ran away Thinking she might put her past to a rest. Life has decided to play one more joke "You're three months pregnant", told her the Doc. She loves her but hates her, how could she not? Girl's Daddy and grandpa are the same sick jerk. It's a story I've heard a year ago about a girl whose father was abusing her and she got pregnant 3 times by him but got through an abortion every time and kept it a secret for many years. Until the last pregnancy... Her father went to jail I think. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Wow...tuff one to write about...good job with a hard subject. Sorry world ain't it? Some of us will never know TRUE Hell on earth. Thank you... Click |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Indeed it is a worrisome world we live in, where sick individuals such as this can get away with such abuse, physical and emotional, for years. Glad he was finally caught! Well written!!  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
That’s a terrible story. I have heard it before though. What a cruel world we live in eh? Well good job on poeticizing it. Yes, he did go to jail…but he only served a month of his sentence. He died a rather painful death, right around 10 PM. A cruel world, but its denizens are not without a sense of irony or justice. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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