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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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You see no hope in your life, I guess you prefer not to be my wife, What made you turn on me? What made you open the door and leave? Deny your feelings if you must, But my love for you is full of lust, You had capture my heart from the day we met, Why must you hide us in society’s hat? If loving you was a crime, Then I am willing to do the time, Weeks have passed since we met, My heart on you is moreover set , Years will pass but I won’t forget, Not being with you I will surely regret. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
*Crying my heart out*  It's so true and beautiful... wonderful poem! Hope all works out for you. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
She is moving away, far, far away.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Very simply said filled with emotion...I'm so sorry...your poem betrays bitterness...hope things fare better sometime soon for you.  Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Xeonox~~~Ever heard the quote "If you want something very badly set it free, if it comes back to you its yours forever. If it doesnt it was never yours to begin with." Well I really do hope that in the future things turn out good for you. You wrote this poem so beautifully. And I hope to see more just like this. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
my god. you read my mind. this is how i feel about wanda. sounds like i have said these words over and over. You see no hope in your life, I guess you prefer not to be my wife, Deny your feelings if you must, But my love for you is full of lust, Years will pass but I won’t forget, Not being with you I will surely regret. its like you read my heart with those lines. espcialy the last one. great work my friend. jesse c jaymz Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
hey i feel for ya hun...im in teh same type of situation...he moved all far far away....its so sad...if u wanna talk...email me....but otherwise...great poem |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Whenever I or anyone else is feeling down, you guys to a great job of bringing me and the others up. Thank you. Ronil (In you guys I find comfort) Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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