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Nobody Cares |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
I get good grades, Nobody cares. I do good deeds, Nobody cares. I do my chores, Nobody cares. I'm a loyal friend, Nobody cares. I do what I'm told, Nobody cares. I'm dying inside, Nobody cares. I cry myself to sleep, Nobody cares. I do one thing wrong, and suddenly, EVERYBODY CARES. The world is coming to an end, Everybody cares. I'm dead, and once again, Nobody cares. I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break ~Lil OnE~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
“I do one thing wrong, and suddenly, EVERYBODY CARES.” Whoa, I can totally relate!!! What a rip off eh? Well we care here at Dark Passions, we’re kinda like communal crutches for each other. Have a good day, OR ELSE! Hahalalala. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
You making me smile I care! You're posting this file I care! You're writing those words I care! You're sharing your thoughts I care! You understand I care! You're reaching a hand I care! You're reading my mind I care! You're just one of a kind I swear! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
nobody cares your right but someone cares that's me. beautiful poem so true. No one seems to care until you do something wrong it's very sad the way it is. I'm here to say that there are a few that do and I care. I know that I'm not the only one. I know you are the same too. alot of nobodies makes a nobody but one somebody makes a voice that can touch millions with there choice to inspire and befriend |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hi Lil One, A very true to life Poem. Nice job. I like it a lot. Keep up the good work. Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person. Boardman |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
It always seems like no one cares about anyone but themselves anymore, y'know. I feel like that sometimes too, but then i look and find that someone does care....Me! Basically, as long as YOU care about what YOU are doing, nothing else should matter much. Anyways, excellent poem. Keep up the good work! |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This is just so original, so fantastic, so superb, so simple yet so exciting.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
in my youth, i could certainly relate to this poem.....but now, i agree with !!! when saying that you should be the only one that matters...as long as YOU care...thats all you need. really great poem ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I am one voice but I am singing, I am not alone. You are one voice and you are singing, I am not alone We are one voice and we are singing we are not alone. It's amazing what a difference one vioce makes. So glad to hear yours Lil OnE. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Thank you all so very much. Your kind replies to my non-important existance really meant a lot. I've been pretty depressed lately, and even here I almost felt rejected. Thank you for proving me wrong. I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break ~Lil OnE~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good point...thats the way it seems to be sometimes...James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It's true!! They seem not to notice you then when weak you make some little error, they are all there to pounce on you!!! I know the feeling well!! But hon, there is a difference, we care too! I dont' say things I don't mean hon..you have friends here in Dark and that is enough for now at least.. *hugs* *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lil OnE, Sweetie, I can totally relate to this I just posted a poem on this very thing, (Just happens to be me) everyone that replyed to this poem is right in what they say, I think the hard part when you are depressed is to beleive that what one convays to you is true, and even here I too have felt like nobody heres my plees for an ear or hug but even here where there is more love than any were else there are moods and ups and downs but that does not mean that we do not care just maybe that we too are having full lives with ups and downs, I am so glad I know how you feel so I can keep you in mind and as I should help in any way I can, thank you so much for your poem it was sad but I-we all do really care and hope you do feel that we do. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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