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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
We do NOT allow the posting of poems that glorify SUICIDE or VIOLENCE, or may influence others in that regard. This includes harming of oneself or others. Thank you, Christopher [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
really good! I'm trying to think of possible titles for you, but I'm having issues... hmmmmm... If it were mine I would give it a one-word title, like "Despair" "Fallen" "Out" or.... a phrase like..."My way Out" Hope I helped a little.  -Jes |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i liked this as well...i like "Relic" it just stood out in the poem. good read! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I like JSage's idea of My Way Out. Sounds really good to me. I also like your poem it is different, but really good!! |
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