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Broken_Heart
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since 2000-07-24
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0 posted 2000-08-29 07:00 AM


The Downfall

Dwindling to insanity
My mind drowns in sorrow
I feel my downfall commencing
As I stand on the brink of madness

Solitude denies me happiness
For the demons in my mind
Strive for corruption
And darkness inside

The downfall breaks me
Tearing my innards out
My sanity is fleeting
My downfall final…



Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within...


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1 posted 2000-08-29 12:21 PM


I liked this one. I have few such as this. Great work.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

JSage
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since 2000-08-25
Posts 91
Nashua, NH USA
2 posted 2000-08-29 01:56 PM


evil, insane, dark, depressingly beautiful.
Another I can relate to.  Insanity can be a marvelous gift, my friend.

-Jes

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