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On the jagged teeth of life
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On the jagged teeth of life |
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
On the jagged teeth of life On the jagged teeth of life My sanity was shattered Fear crippling my heart As if run through by a stake In my mouth of madness I scream out loud in silence Trying to break life’s bonds As if I am chained by pain Treacherous is my road now Indifference gripping my soul The silence around me deafening On the jagged teeth of life… Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I liked the title and every line of your poetry.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~"The silence around me deafening",...Oye!!! That hurts doesn't it? Such a real writing here. Consuming. Take care BH. *Peace. |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
I liked each and every line of this. Each just as strong as the next. I liked the whole concept of your perspective, too. Well done!! I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break ~Lil OnE~ |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Another fragile being torn asunder by the unmerciful gaping maw that is life...You captured this feeling pretty well. Good job. |
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