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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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hi again yall wow, i just cant stop writing. this one like all of mine seem to be is about me and my ex wanda. i know some of yall are proboly tired of hearing about it but it is my insperation latley. so tell me what yall think. i love you wanda. and i hope that someday i can get back to virginia and get something that i left with you. my heart In your eyes I fell in love again last night When I looked into your eyes I fall in love with you more and more as the days go by i can still remember the day we met you looked like a goddess in your faded blues jeans my heart melted when you steped from your truck lord it was a site to be seen we stood there all nervous we didnt know what to say I wanted just to hold you but i kept my feelings at bay so we went back to my house and sat together on my bed we talked about everything i couldnt get you out of my head then we laid down together cuddled up under some blankets and watched tv i knew it when i held you there in my arms that you were the only one for me you fell asleep in our embrace with a look of total bliss and just before i closed my eyes i gave your forehead alittle kiss we laid there for hours all snuggled together i knew it right then and there that we'd be together forever i gave you everything i had my soul, my body, my heart i never thought that there would be a day that we'd ever be apart but then came the day that you said you have found another you said that we would always be best friends but that we could no longer be lovers that shattered my heart i couldnt beleave my ears i never thought this would happen i automaticaly burst into tears a love that i thought would last forever has now come to an end all with in a few seconds we went from soulmates to friends i told you that i was happy for you but i knew deep down i was lying all i wanted was to be in your arms but right now i cant stop crying all i want for you is your happyness and it looks like it was never with me so good luck with your marrige hun i just wish that it was to me but i guess i will have to wait my turn to be in your heart again to be once more the man of your dreamz to once again be your boyfriend i will love you forever wanda and all you got to do is call and i will be by your side before the next tear drop fallz but now i will just return to the darkness and patiantly wait my turn for me to call you mine again cuz the fire in my heart for you will always burn when you want me back all you have to is call my name and i will be back to virginia in no time by bus, train or by plane but for now we will live forever together in my memory where it can be just you and me... Jesse C Jaymz Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Jess, hon, this is so sad and melancholy. The reader can't help but feel your pain, your confusion. Great work, a broken heart, brings out the best writing in you, that is for sure!! But watch your spelling my bro LOL  *hugs* Isis *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
sis *hugs* sure mock me when i am down. hehehehehe. i know i cant spell. but some i spell that way on purpose. i have alwayz ended alot of words in z. just cuz of my name. jaymz. and yes it seems that heart ache is bringing out the best writing in me. in a way i wish i didnt have to write. but alas i guess i will live. i just wish that she could see all my love. =( thanks for the comment hun. *hugs* love you sis Jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....i feel your pain! i really do....what a sweet poem! aww..awwww....that was so nice....great work! its her loss! k..keep up the good work!.well much love~ MiSeRyDivine All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Did you hear that? It was my heart breaking for you my friend> This was so sad...but keep writng and let your emotion out..it is good for you. Hey write me okay |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
*sniff* Ohhh... so sad. But you've written your feelings so well. Take care ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reminds me of my ex girlfriend Billie...when she graduated high school she moved from Calif. to Arizona and me and a mutual girlfriend went to visit her and the girl I drove with told me she hid a picture of her boyfriend just before I came in...me and Billie walked and talked in the sunset but somehow it was not the same. I ended up in a relationship with her girlfriend Nancy for about two years... When me and Nancy broke up I thought about Billie again...when I wrote to her she sent me back a wedding invitation in the mail...The wedding had taken place three months earlier...she had married a marine...any way the man she married started physically abusing her and by about six months the marriage was pretty much over...she recontacted me and told me the situation but somehow I felt like I shouldn't intervine. I have regrets that I possibly missed my opportunity...but feelings change and I let her go...I still have a picture of her...one of my first loves...Billy Jean Smith... She was a special woman....James |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
MiseryDivine: *blushes* thanks hun. all the awwwws made me blush very badly. i still blush alot when i get compliments. no it is my loss. she was the sweetest woman that i ever met. and she gave me everything. but i left her. so it is my fault. and my loss =( thanks. *hugs* kitkat: *hugs* your heart broke for me?? that is one of the sweetest things anyone ever said to me. thank you. as for me i am still extreamly heartbroken. i will write you. *hugs* Tara. *hugs* thanks hun. its nice to know that people love my work james: my friend that is really sad on what happened to you. i truely can feel your pain. and we both know that in our hearts the pain will never fade. who knows what will happen down the road. mabey me and her will be together again. but then could i do that?? could i take her back?? i want to so badly. Wanda Lee Breeden your name is etched on the beaches of my soul forever and there isnt a wave big enough that can wash that name away. Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Jesse, it's really beautiful. Don't worry about us, we're not tired to hear about Wanda, let it all out! It comes out so naturally, I can imagine it like a movie before my eyes... Great work! |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
thanks lm. my life has been like movie. sometimes a happy one, sometimes a love story, and mostly a very depressing one. =( but i guess yall can see that in all that i write. i am so down right now though. she said that i am still the man of her dreams. yet she is marrying another. why?? why not me?? why not the man of her dreamz??? i guess i will never know. my dreamz arent meant to come true. ok i have reanted enough. thanks for your reply hun *hugs* love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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