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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-08-29 12:33 PM


Ladies and Gentlemen
fasten your seatbelts
were going on a ride
to insanity
it doesn't cost a penny
but your brains will be skinny
by the time that we are through
Not to worry I've got a first class
ticket for you
On the trip fasten in and take
a pill or two
for you might need to
relax on the edge of psychosis
that makes you want to notice
all the clouds in this here sky
Number nine is really there
so often we all thought
it was just a delusion
but it's not for I got caught
riding there on cloud nine
So as we take this ride keep in mind
the plane is bound for a town
you've never heard of
but I know it oh so well
welcome Ladies and Gentlemen
to INSANITY.
Enjoy the clothes
the nice leisure jackets
that makes your arms stay put
they will even feed to with a little spoon
Here we are on the edge of insanity
brings nothing but lands filled with
cotton candy and lolly pops
so please join in
and hum this song we all have the same tune
It's a one way ticket if I forgot to mention
so come along with me.
They may not offer cocktails
but I can give you nuts
there are lots of nuts
here. Enjoy


[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 08-29-2000).]

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taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-08-29 12:56 PM


Hey! This is terrific!!!    Thanks for the read!  

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-08-29 01:07 AM


glad you enjoyed the ride be it a little bumpy, but hey wasn't cloud nine quite sublime?
poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
3 posted 2000-08-29 05:10 AM


LOL
FANTASTIC
loved this!
~Dawn


"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2000-08-29 06:28 AM


Rosebud this was Bliss, I loved cloud nine, missed the cocktails, but enjoyed the nuts.

Be well
Kethry



"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
5 posted 2000-08-29 08:36 PM


I think I could lose my mind over this (Pun intended)!  Where do I sign up?  Can I get a window seat?  

Hehe, that was sheer genius…I’m only bitter that you came up with it first…(:  



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Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-08-30 01:10 AM


hey glad you enjoyed the ride . It is a heck of a ride is this here sky especially when we pass cloud nine! And remember that twilight zone movie with that creature hanging on the wing. I think he's in my seat lol
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