In Hope for a better tomorrow

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #2

In Hope for a better tomorrow

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

0 posted 2000-08-27 05:08 PM

My friend and I were really down today and I was trying to convince us both tomorrow will be better.

In Hope for a better tomorrow

Tomorrow sun will shine
Apon my darkenning hope

And music so sublime
Will cheer my aching soul.

My knight will storm inside
And save me from distress.

Cool breeze will clear my mind
From thoughts' entangled maze.

Luck will smile MY way
And be a friend to ME.

Ones who caused me heartache
From heart will disappear.

So I'm waiting for tomorrow,
And dare you not be such!

For today is pain and sorrow...
Is it asking for too much?

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-08-27 10:39 PM

This poem is so sad and so powerful. I am glad your friend has you to convey the meaning of the feelings that are felt.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

MiseryDivine
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

2 posted 2000-08-27 11:26 PM

hey i really like this....its very good! awesome work!

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-28 04:45 AM

Thanks Xeonox and Misery for your comments

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-08-29 11:33 PM

I hope all that positive thinking helps you! Take care. Great poem.
Sandra

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.