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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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0 posted 2000-08-28 01:02 PM


Exhausted I AM
Closing my eyes
In a daze
Exhausted thinking of you.
How can I continue in this frame
of mind.
No way out
Exhausted I am.
Twenty four seven
I imagine you near
the way your words
caress my ear.
Exhausted I am at the break of the day
though I slept all night.
I dreamt of you.
You exhaust me in your ways
I am so profounded by you
want to be there with you
but exhausted I am here
without a clue to be revived.


© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-28 01:18 PM


Wow!
loved this...i share my voice with yours in this one!!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



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2 posted 2000-08-28 04:29 PM


Boy am I am exhausted.   Great work. I like this very much.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Rosebud1229
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3 posted 2000-08-28 11:43 PM


thanks poutprincess and xeonex
AVANTI
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INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
4 posted 2000-08-28 11:59 PM


well written...


If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



Rosebud1229
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5 posted 2000-08-30 01:13 AM


the heart is a beautiful thing that makes our mind of course go insane, exhaustingly so. thanks for reply Avanti
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