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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Exhausted I AM Closing my eyes In a daze Exhausted thinking of you. How can I continue in this frame of mind. No way out Exhausted I am. Twenty four seven I imagine you near the way your words caress my ear. Exhausted I am at the break of the day though I slept all night. I dreamt of you. You exhaust me in your ways I am so profounded by you want to be there with you but exhausted I am here without a clue to be revived. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Wow! loved this...i share my voice with yours in this one!! ~Dawn  "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Boy am I am exhausted.  Great work. I like this very much.Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thanks poutprincess and xeonex |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written... If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
the heart is a beautiful thing that makes our mind of course go insane, exhaustingly so. thanks for reply Avanti |
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