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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States 
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In all my life I don't think I will ever find a love as sweet as yours. I spend my days consumed by you and wondering what will happen next. You talk to me almost everyday and describe a love so true. And even though we are miles apart, I feel as if you are here. You have such a way with words, I am always amazed. Sending me kisses and smiles and hugs... I never felt so loved. Writing loving words to me, they tell me I am too nice, But the problem herein lies in the fact that we are both tied to another. So what are we to do to make the situation better? I don't think either of us wants to hurt another... But is this just a game we play Or is it a real love? For I am torn between this love and the trap I have fallen into. I reach up for someone to pull me out, but no one is there. I don't know which way to turn to keep myself together. I feel like I am missing out on a love that would forever make me surrender, but alas like I have said before.... I don't want to hurt the other... I don't seem to have an answer to this situation, I know it won't be easy to find, so I will just keep searching. "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i understand and feel every word of this...no matter how complicated things may be, true love transcends. you will find your way one day...dont ever give up that search! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
First...my words of "wisdom" (hehe) --I am a firm believer that if you truly believe its love, its best to just enjoy it and avoid analyzing...it drives one crazy..Mind you, I never follow my own advice.  NOW...my comment to the poem --I just love free verse...it always comes out so naturally and you are a natural free-verser...WELL DONE, DEE! NOTE: I love form too but MY natural voice is free-verse. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this is a very loving piece. Sometimes through the internet we reach into realms that reach back and become attached to another, I wish you all the best. The most powerful thing is LOVE.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, Dee, I am so much standing beside you here. So hard. All I can say is love is the most important thing. And the answer from there, who knows? Very beautiful writing. Sandra |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
I understand how you feel... well written piece If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
You describe this situation very well... I hope it all works out okay for you!  "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
I just want to thank everyone for their nice words and wishes...I keep striving for answers to my questions. Thank you. Dee  "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dee, great poem. I hope it works out for you, but if not enjoy the moment. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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