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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-08-28 07:25 AM


NO RETURN

Darkness within
Brightness without
Shadowed by a
cloud of doubt.
Am I still living,
deep inside?
Lacking pain,
that I hide.
Sharp razor,
not even a flinch.
Trickling blood,
just from a pinch.
Life's a blur,
death sounds clear.
No more need,
to ever fear!
Death welcomes me,
life turns away.
No longer easy,
for me to stay.
I walk toward death,
he grabs my hand.
Life's slipping,
like hourglass sand.
When the last grain,
comes tumbling down,
I change my mind,
& turn around.
Is it too late?
Have I givin in?
Did he take my soul?
I'm now dead within!

LOVE ELMO  


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Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-08-28 11:37 AM


NO return, this is so true once death overtakes us there is no turning back . The lights will never radiate their brightness, the sun will no longer warm our skin. All that awaits is the coldness of the ground with the bugs waiting to feast on us. I believe life is a gift so often that rushes by. We live but for a short while. If death comes knocking, turn and run so you may surely feel the light of a brand new day.
Each day is a gift sent from above.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2000-08-28 04:28 PM


Yea thanx Rosebud   i wrote this one on 8-23-00 my 19th birthday (I'm legal in Canada!)   hee hee LOVE ELMO
AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
3 posted 2000-08-29 12:19 PM


very deep thoughts...
true words...well written...


If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



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