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Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-08-28 01:58 AM


Darkness mode
foretold of my soul
in this forum

Lights go out
but still I reel
with such a feel
that must be told.

Ice cold veins
of blood stained
droplets on this
page that is my
words that tell of
my life.

Dark passions
with assassins
that seem to torment me
on and on.
Darkness lures me in
to this magnet
that takes on a new light
that is called night
I must go in deeper still.

We all feel the stillness
that seems to seal
the fate to which we go
darkness between the days
that's where we'll stay for yet
another night.

© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
sonjes
Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-08-28 07:23 AM


is this an answer to the challenge about DP?  If it is, it is very clever indeed.
  However, if its not, and I am way off...which I sometimes am...then I still like it because your words are then mysterious and I will have to reread it several times (after my coffee has done its trick)...
  Either way...I enjoyed reading it and will enjoy reading it again.  

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma


Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-08-28 10:23 AM


why yes Sonjes your right on . IT is I forgot to put that.. darn it! glad you liked.. it maybe I NEED a diet coke.
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