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Rex
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0 posted 2000-08-25 10:57 AM


If you should leave me...
I would not ask for strength nor prayer,
But just to lie in the death of your silence...
And die 'mid the quiet there.



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1 posted 2000-08-25 11:31 AM


short and right to the point rex. Another poem well written.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

demoninlove
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Dehradun
2 posted 2000-08-25 12:08 PM


Lovely - beautifully dreamy - You have felt it all Rex
Deepak


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3 posted 2000-08-25 03:51 PM


Rex, you have a way of saying the most profound things in such a precise and to the point way, while still sounding romantic. Amazing. I love this, and have felt it just this way.
Sandra

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