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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
FLAME: Torn apart, across, my heart Being once, being me Further grown in jaws alone Wondering what is free Falling fast, without grasp Down again below Failing mine, one at a time My life, me, slows Gratings closed, juxtaposed Life, alive, live Laws of life within my mind Dictate: always give The candle's flame Seems the same Then instantly flickers out. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I just loved the ending. The candle's flame Seems the same Then instantly flickers out. Great job!!!  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very intense and emotional, S. I like this a lot. Catalinamoon |
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